The Hypnosis App Was Fake - Chapter 12
Chapter 12: The Glitch in My Perfect System
【Elizabeth PoV】
I wasn’t just waiting by the vending machine.
I was hunting.
My phone screen displayed the admin dashboard, metrics scrolling past in neat rows. Alfred’s heart rate spiked to 127 BPM. Cortisol levels elevated. Location tracking showed him approaching from the east hallway. The app fed me everything, every biological tell, every nervous system response.
He thought he was the predator. Adorable.
The phone buzzed. Command input detected. I read the text and my pulse quickened.
Target: Elizabeth Ashford. Command: Hand-Holding (Public). Duration: Until dismissed.
My fingers tightened around the phone. He actually did it. He actually chose me first.
Something warm bloomed in my chest, dangerous and possessive. I wanted to 【REDACTED】 him right here against the vending machine until he understood exactly who owned who in this dynamic.
I forced my expression neutral. Cool. Bored. The perfect hypnotized puppet.
Footsteps approached. I didn’t look up.
He cleared his throat. That nervous little sound he made when his confidence was pure theater.
“Elizabeth.”
I lifted my head slowly, letting my eyes go slightly unfocused. The app displayed his vitals in my peripheral vision. Heart rate climbing. Breathing shallow. Palms sweating.
Perfect.
“Hold my hand.”
His voice cracked on the last word. I bit down on my tongue to keep from smiling.
My hand moved mechanically, reaching for his. Our fingers touched and electricity shot up my arm. His skin was warm, slightly rough at the knuckles, and I wanted to 【CENSORED】 every single finger until he was gasping my name.
But I kept my face blank. Empty. Obedient.
His hand trembled in mine. I could feel his pulse through his palm, rapid and frantic.
The admin dashboard updated. Command accepted. Subject compliant. His confidence score jumped fifteen points.
Good boy. Keep thinking you’re winning.
“Interlock our fingers.”
Oh, he was getting bolder. I complied immediately, sliding my fingers between his, pressing our palms flush together. The lover’s grip. Intimate. Possessive. Exactly what I wanted.
Heat pooled low in my stomach. This was everything. His hand in mine, his choice, his command. I wanted to drag him into the nearest closet and 【DATA EXPUNGED】 until neither of us could walk straight.
Students passed by in the hallway. Some stared. Some whispered. Let them look. Let them see Alfred holding my hand like he owned me.
Even though we both knew the truth.
His thumb brushed against mine, probably accidental. The touch sent sparks cascading through my nervous system. I catalogued every detail. The callus on his index finger from holding pens. The faint scar near his wrist. The way his hand completely engulfed mine.
I wanted to 【REDACTED】 that hand. Wanted to 【CENSORED】 it until he understood what he did to me.
“Walk with me.”
He was steering us now, pulling me gently down the hallway. The admin panel showed his destination prediction. Auxiliary stairwell. Probability: 87%.
Oh, Alfred. So predictable.
But I didn’t mind. The stairwell was private. Quiet. Perfect for what I’d been planning.
Time to go off-script.
We reached the door. He pushed it open, glancing around to make sure no one was watching. His paranoia was almost endearing.
The stairwell was empty. Concrete steps, metal railings, fluorescent lights humming overhead. Not romantic by any standard definition.
I didn’t care.
The door clicked shut behind us. We were alone.
My pulse hammered against my ribs. This was my chance. My moment to speed up the process, to push past his stupid safety mechanisms and claim what was mine.
I turned to face him, stepping closer. His eyes widened, surprised by the movement.
“Elizabeth, I didn’t command you to—”
I closed my eyes and tilted my face up.
Universal signal. Unmistakable intention. Even someone as dense as Alfred couldn’t miss this.
Kiss me. Just kiss me. Stop being afraid and take what I’m offering.
My lips parted slightly. Anticipation coiled tight in my chest. I was ready to give him everything. Ready to let him think he’d won, that his app had broken me completely, that I was his to command and control and 【CENSORED】 however he wanted.
Seconds ticked past.
Nothing happened.
I waited, eyes closed, exposed and vulnerable in a way that made my skin crawl with need.
Still nothing.
Then his hand ripped away from mine.
“SAFETY HAZARD DETECTED!”
My eyes snapped open. Alfred was backing away, pointing at something behind me with genuine terror.
A wet floor sign. Yellow plastic. Cartoon man slipping.
He was freaking out about a wet floor sign.
“The maintenance crew didn’t properly cordon off this area! Someone could slip! Lawsuit liability! School negligence!”
Something inside me cracked.
Not broke. Cracked. Like ice over deep water, hairline fractures spreading fast and lethal.
I’d offered myself to him. Closed my eyes. Tilted my face up like some lovesick idiot from a shoujo manga. And he chose a safety hazard over me.
The warm feeling in my chest turned cold. Arctic. The kind of cold that burned.
My hand shot out and grabbed his before he could fully retreat. I squeezed.
Hard.
“Ow! Elizabeth, that hurts—”
I squeezed harder, feeling his bones grind together beneath my grip. Not enough to break anything. Just enough to send a message.
His face went pale. The app dashboard lit up with warnings. Pain response detected. Stress hormones spiking. Fight-or-flight activated.
Good. Feel that. Remember that.
I held his terrified gaze for three long seconds, then released him.
He cradled his hand against his chest, staring at me like I’d transformed into something monstrous.
“You’re still hypnotized, right? That was just a glitch, right?”
I let my expression go blank again. Empty. Doll-like.
“Of course. I am under your control.”
The lie tasted like poison.
He relaxed slightly, buying it completely. Idiot. Beautiful, frustrating, safety-obsessed idiot.
“Maybe we should head back. This stairwell is clearly unsafe.”
I nodded mechanically and followed him out.
The hallway felt too bright after the dim stairwell. Students milled around, oblivious to the murder I was contemplating.
Alfred kept glancing at me nervously, like he expected me to malfunction again.
I wanted to 【REDACTED】 him. Wanted to 【CENSORED】 him until that stupid wet floor sign was the least of his concerns.
But I smiled instead. Sweet. Harmless. Hypnotized.
“I’ll see you later, Alfred.”
“Yeah. Later.”
He practically ran away, disappearing into the crowd.
I stood there alone, hand still tingling from where I’d crushed his fingers.
Positive reinforcement wasn’t working fast enough. He needed negative reinforcement. Consequences. A scenario where running away wasn’t an option.
My phone buzzed. The admin panel displayed new options, waiting for input.
I opened the code editor and started typing.
New protocol: Punishment Mode. Trigger: Rejection of physical affection. Response: Environmental lock. No exits. No safety hazards. No excuses.
My fingers flew across the screen, building the scenario brick by brick. A locked room. Just the two of us. No wet floor signs to save him. No fire extinguishers to obsess over. Nothing but me and him and the inevitable conclusion.
If he wouldn’t accept my love willingly, I’d 【CENSORED】 it into him until accepting became his only option.
The code compiled perfectly. Green checkmarks across the board.
I saved the file and closed the app, slipping my phone into my pocket.
Tomorrow. Tomorrow I’d trigger the new scenario. Tomorrow Alfred would learn that glitches had consequences.
Tomorrow that wet floor sign would seem like a blessing compared to what I had planned.
I walked down the hallway, footsteps echoing against linoleum.
“Idiot,” I muttered under my breath.
But my smile was sharp enough to cut glass.





































